Now, this strip -- and the next few following it -- gave me a lot of issues.  My original script for these four strips was pretty horrible; not only was it wordy, it didn't even make people's meanings clear.  Gah!  I hate it when I do that!  Fortunately, several months of distance allowed me to re-script things much better when I sat down to the lettering, and I now no longer wince when I remember this storyline.  Which is a good thing, given that it's the last storyline of a particular sketchbook!



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