So, I realize this is a risky storyline.  I realized it the moment I first realized what Aylia was going to do, because it challenges the basic assumptions of the whole story.  But she insisted on this, and she really was completely right -- this is exactly what she would do.  I've seen stories that became stale because the author didn't have the courage to change anything important; I've also seen stories that lost appeal for me because the author changed the wrong thing (killing a character I loved, for example).



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